Maksudul Karim, Nowrin Sultana, Mohammad Shahadat Hossain, Afnan Musammed Inan, Dipa Das
student
Premier University, Chittagong.
Bangladesh
Urban Design and Landscape
• Being a natural site and a tourist space we develop our concept to create a eco friendly garden with multipurpose function, so that one can experience nature… more
Hello I hope you are doing well!
I am Jani, a former Inspireli Awards winner and Juror. I have been given the task of giving feedback on your project.
First I would thank you for participating Inspireli Awards. Competitions provide large oportunities to exercise new ideas, and this is the perfect place for an architecture students to expres themselves.
I want to congratulate you on your work and efort put on the creation of the physical model.
Your project is very interesting, but I think more explanation regarding the concept is needed . A graphic presentation of the concept is very important to draw the attention of the audience. What are the reasons that you are zoning the plan like this? Are the functions you propose results of an wider analyse or just sugestions from you as an idea for the eco friendly space? I see you analysed the existing urban context, but in urbanism the analyse is much more complex, you must understand the political and economical context why the urban context evolved like it is and what are those elements that are missing that in your proposition would help everyon in that area. In urbanism half of the work is analyse and you must understand clearly the problems, there is nothing worst than answering right the wrong question. Just saying that to keep in mind for futher projects. Im sure you analysed and understood it well but more graphical explanation is needed. The Nature there is really unique and your organic approach is interesting, the conection with nature, and its preservation is very important. If you propose new buildings it would be better if the buildins are more integrated with nature and more oganic in form, not so rational and ordinary buildings, would feel like the buildings are part of the landscape. The proposition is very dynamic in forms and activities but to explain it better some eye level views, renders or hand sketches would help a lot the wider audience to understand and feel how would it be to live in that place.
Such projects are realised from governments or institutions and in real life where you have to present the project in the institutions often will be people with no architectural knowledge and you have to make it easier for them.
In architecture it is very important how the project is served to a wider audience.
The comments are general and I hope they will help in advancing your project as well as your further studies, and i am very interested in your progres on this topic, as it has high study interest.
I wish you all the best in this humane profession.