Sera İpekçioğlu
student
Baskent University
Turkey
Interior Design
Tutti Insieme is a project based on Tartufo di Pizzo, an Italian street dessert. Street culture is the main point of this project, Tartufo di Pizzo. The… more
Daniel Sirvent
advisor
https://cvnet.cpd.ua.es/curriculum-breve/es/sirvent-perez-cesar-daniel/7373
Spain
Professor of architecture at the University of Alicante, he teaches the subject "Singular… more
Hello Sera, congratulations for your work.
First, I would like to say that it's great that you present a lot of renders, but don't forget that the main tool that Architects have to explain a project is the plan: you only included a very small one, in a panel full of things, so it's not easy to understand what is happening there, how it works, and so on.
Regarding the use of the space, keep in mind that is a public space where many people are supposed to enter (many of them do not know this place). So, this idea of the different steps may be good for "creating spaces" and areas of use, but it's very dangerous for people: they could fall.
I also see lots of "stuff" inside this space: this makes people not to pay attention to the most important parts of the space, so maybe it's a good idea to "clean up" the proposal a bit, and and keep only the essentials.
Last tip: I would like to remind you that Architecture has its own language; "Tartufo di Pizzo" is an Italian street dessert, not Architecture itself... the conceptual idea behind the architecture has to be more than just a metaphor.
Good luck in your future proffesional life!
First of all, I would like to thank you very much for the criticism and feedbacks you gave to my project. What you said caused me to look at my project from a different perspective. I will develop my project taking into account the criticisms and feedbacks you have made. Thank you very much for taking the time to talk about my project.