Dhanushka abeywickrama
student
SLIIT
Sri Lanka
Architecture
Rathnapura known as the “City of Gems”. It has a deep-rooted heritage and cultural background that revolves around the existence of gems that is one of the… more
Cristina Gliboceanu
advisor
http://utm.md/
Moldavian
Contemporary styles, trends and novelties in the design world. more
The idea and concept are very good.
However, there is a lot of text that repeats itself. More text does not mean more chances of winning. For the most part, the text in the description is sufficient (project idea, project description, technical information). In the images, a minimum of text is desirable, or if the visualizations do not require explanations, it is excellent without text.
If I understand correctly, this will be a complex, which will serve not only for the processing and sale of precious stones but also as a tourist location. It would be much better and clearer if the zoning of the complex were indicated somewhere (an additional plan maybe). Most people do not imagine how some precious stones are processed and what the stages are. Adding the zoning of the complex will be clear from the start the stages of stone processing, furnishing the interior spaces, and the road that tourists will travel during the trip.
If there was an explanation of zoning in the sketch images - I apologize. The text is very small, handwritten and I could not read it.
Good luck!