Hendre Erasmus

advisor

University of the Free State

South African

Education, Healthcare, Hospitality and Industrial more

Thank you for your submission Majed.

What a beautiful building.

However, even though you mentioned that this building is placed in a fictional context, I would recommend that you provide more information on this fictional context. (where is it located, what is the climate, what does the farmer farm?) A building has a very special relationship with its context. The most appropriate buildings respond, comment, challenge, enhance and celebrate their contextes. But it can only have a relationship with a context if it has one.

It is also important to note that a context not only refers to physical topographic location but includes the historical, emotional, cultural, climatic, socio-economic etc. contextes.

It would also strongly suggest that you provide more information on the building. Include plans, sections and elevations. What would you like to communicate with your presentation? Use your drawings and images to communicate that message. Show the natural ventilation strategies and the greenery you refer to. Images and drawings are how we as architects communicate. It will also be interesting to see your design process and thinking behind the design. Consider including some concept sketches.

All the best.