sabri aljawari
student
Thamar university
Yemen
Architecture
The architectural form is inspired by nature. It transforms the nature-like element into architectural components instead of straight forward geometrical… more
Saeed Shenakhteh
advisor
www.instagram.com/saeedshenakhteh
iranian
As an architect with a positive view of the future of architecture and the impact of architecture… more
Dear patience
First of all, I am very glad that you shared your idea and project in this contest. Your main idea and its extraction from the nature of work is very effective and today's architecture needs to change the style and basic concepts.
First of all, I must say that when we look at any part of nature, we encounter excellent proportions and excellent performance from different angles, and this makes us look at such a concept more sensitively, and unfortunately, good proportions are not used. In your work, although the initial idea and its implementation are good, but it takes more effort to become the work of the present century.
To explain the project, you have neglected the performance, details, use of light, wind, etc. and diagrams, so you should know that the overview is visible for a few moments and you should check the details. And the formation process and project diagrams. .
To explain the project, you have to show more diagrams in appropriate dimensions with the plans, and the last point of the project does not match the landscape, and it is obvious that there is a lack of work and non-adherence to the initial idea.
Dear Mr. Saeed Shenakhteh, thank you very much for your feedback.
Site analysis and plans are existed in the project, but the image quality is too poor.
I am Thankful to you for your time and remarkable comments for my project. it really means a lot. Thanks and regards.