Perla Abou Sleiman
student
USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik
Lebanon
Architecture
After having located the land in Ghobeiry - Beirut, near Camille Chamoun Stadium, it is necessary to make an analysis of the site. Taking into consideration… more
Gershon Pocorni
advisor
www.grparchitects.com
Dutch
GRParchitects, Focus on Green Building Solutions more
How you want to bring the connection through the building with the design, as it now is a static design without a lot of dramatic movement, we know Sport connect but Architecture can also be a form of connection and bridge what is visible.
I recommend making a visible connection through the buildings as it now looks like a couple of separate units, maybe with your green roof you can connect it with a green wall and a green park going through the area as Parks also connect.
The green can be more dramatic and visible to connect the different architecture with each other as it will become one. At the moment it looks like a separation.
Check https://www.10design.co/work/architecture/mixed-use/chengdu-mixed-use-development
http://www.arch2o.com/beko-masterplan-zaha-hadid/
The renders need some more improvement and better lighting to create a better atmosphere, try to use photo's from sunsets think like a photographer.