shahriar kabir
student
Ahsanullah University of Science and Technology
Bangladesh
Architecture
A university is an institution of higher education and research which awards academic degrees in various academic disciplines. The propose of a campus is to… more
Maria Luisa Germanà
advisor
www.unipa.it
Italian
My research activity deals with various aspects of the Architectural Technology. The main themes… more
Dear Shahriar Kabir,
First of all, congratulations on submitting your project to INSPIRELI AWARDS, an important experience of comparison and growth for students from all over the world.
As for the campus you proposed, it seems to be a decontextualized idea. In the description, there is no mention of the presence of the river (?) that can be glimpsed in some drawings, nor of the orientation (solar path).
The anthropic context also seems to be absent: are we in an urban or semi-urban area? In the center or on the outskirts? How do you get there?
As for the building itself, the lack of plans that make understand the distribution schemes and the integration of the different activities of the campus can penalize the proposal.
Even in the descriptive text, it is noted that there is a lack of balance between the paragraphs "Project idea", "Project description" and Technical information ", which is actually only three lines.
I hope this comment of mine will be useful.
Best wishes for a good job and good luck!
Maria Luisa Germanà