Mohamed Yasser

advisor

Architecture Department at Fayoum University

egyptian

- Architectural Design - Interior Design - Nanotechnology and 3D Printing more

First of all the project is beautiful and there is a big effort done in the design, I have some comments that may help you improve your project.
1- Rooftops over the two intersected circular masses you can benefit from them instead of just a flat roof you can design an outdoor recreation or activity area that can be accessed from outside with a ramp or a stair.

2- Another idea you can end the building's roof with a specially shaped form (skin) to add a flexible and dynamic feeling to the design to match with the dynamic and vibrant design of the facades.

3- The design has a lot of potentials to add landscapes and plants in different parts of the building, as green is always beautiful and relaxing and gives the design a vibrant soul, which strengthens the design concept of the project.