Rosalyn Hariyanto
student
Ciputra University (UC / Universitas Ciputra)
Indonesia
Architecture
Building a student center for the general public's, that's also intellectually driven for students & oriented for the professional convenience of teachers and… more
The project appears to be of high quality and includes some of the criteria of a sustainable architecture (SDG). My recommendations will take place in terms of graphic presentation and technical aspect.
My recommendations are as follows:
- The site plan should include more information on the total dimensions of the building, quotation of levels, symbols of main, secondary and tertiary entrances as well as the main plot can be defined while the rest of the urban context remains in the background.
- The ground floor should be presented with a part of the external context, in order to have a connection between the internal and the external environment .
- Facilitate the facades of the building in terms of graphic presentation and make distinctions between what is closer and farther from the viewing angle. Introduce only the main materials to give the effect of a simple and clean facade.
- Sections might have a schematic plan of the ground floor in a corner of the sheet, to have a clearer idea of ??where it is in the plan, and what characteristic or special elements of the project will be presented in it.
Best regards!