Mustafa Eroğlu
student
Istanbul Kültür University, Faculty of Architecture, Istanbul
Turkey
Architecture
In the 21st century, the concept of sustainability has become a subject of interest to many people. It is also the main theme of my project. In 2020, we… more
Mohana Das
advisor
https://www.polimi.it/
Indian
I am an Architect and Urban Designer by profession. My research interests are: Healthcare… more
I think it is a great start and appreciate your implementation of sustainable design goals in sports architecture. It is indeed the need of the hour to design responsibly and sustainably. A few suggestions that I might add:
I The concept sheet can be more informative- giving out more idea to a new person about the context, activities happening around the site etc. as you know the site best!
I The second sheet has plans but they are not clearly visible, if they do not hold much importance from the competition point of view according to you, then the aerial shot can be explained in a better way with what new activities and functions you are proposing.
I The aerial shot need not be repeated twice from different angles as they do not exhibit much difference, rather a more detailed shot taken of the site from Google Earth can be added with the proposed design in it, to show how it naturally becomes part of the context.
I Maybe more activities can be shown in the renders to make it look more lively and an active place. But this is really optional.
Good luck Mustafa!