Prakhar Rastogi, Adit Gupta, Vaibhav Gupta, PAV Design Lab
student
Sushant School of Art and Architecture, Gurgaon
India
Architecture
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Mian Hassan Naveed
advisor
https://www.neduet.edu.pk/
Pakistani
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Dear Prakhar Rastogi,
I liked the way you approached your design, however, few suggestions are forwarded for your improvement;
1. Too much interlocking of volumes recues of the quality of space and functionality.
2. Façade landscape need to controlled as it's disturbing indoor-outdoor visual connection.
3. Bangalore's climate is moderate and receives much heavy rainfall. This climatic constraint need to be addressed while designing elevations.
4. Curving mass is not going with your over all theme. You may explore linear geometries.
5. Building envelope has many un attended edges/corners, specially near openings.
Try to increase more thermal mass (solids surfaces) to enhance balance in proportions.
Regards,
Ar. Mian Hassan Naveed