Lina Ballita
student
USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik
Lebanon
Architecture
Between water and land, a gateway to the sea and from there begins the discovery of the universe. Our universe, Beirut, the heart of Lebanon, the cedar on the… more
Mostafa Magdy
advisor
Al Shorouk Academy
Egyptian
Mostafa Magdy is a Teaching Assistant at the Architecture department of the Higher Institute of… more
Hello Lina, I read the information about your project, the idea is fascinating and for a young architect like you I encourage you to keep thinking like this which will help you make great projects in the future once you master the tools of thinking and be able to show the idea better in the drawings,
First of all, I loved how you broke down every part into diagrams and showed your inspiration at first
You also mentioned that the parking will be below the project and you used the space above as seating which will be an urban gathering area that is beautiful
the hall will be animated by nature, that is a good idea .. your diagrams need to show it better but that is good as well
When it comes to graphics You need to use a formal font and a lower density shadow, your sections don't need any background it can speak on their own; the background may distort the juror from understanding your idea
I will quote you " The central part "the hall" emphasizes the difficult course of Beirut, the joy of victory, and the vision of the peaceful realization of mankind" what are the symbols that define the difficult course of Beirut that you referred to while you design the main hall and how will the visitors feel those difficulties? I couldn't found something that explains it in a clear way thus it is the core of your concept.
The circulation is displayed in a good way, I like the way you have thought before you begin to design the project but try to answer my question in your future project and I am sure you are going to be a great architect.
Greetings,
Mostafa Magdy
Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate all your remarks and will take them into consideration!
Thank you for your time!
Best regards,
Lina Ballita