Irene Andri, Marina Andrioti
student
University of Patras, School of Engineering, Department of Architecture, Patras
Greece
Urban Design and Landscape
The idea of the project is to transfer the editorial of Τhe Sims video games to reality through architecture The game aims to keep the inhabitants of its… more
Dear Irene Andri,
first at all, I would like to thank you for participation in the competition. I am contacting you as a jury member of Inspireli Awards to give you feedback about your project.
I found your project really interesting as an old sim's player. I love it. it's very unique idea to transform the fantasy world of the game into the real world. So there is a few suggestions to improve your chances of winning.
-One of the important things is the connection between the slides. Try to bring the slides in order, and tell the story of your project.
-Use the text on the slides for further explanation and write in English
-In the description, you talked about an application that measures the amount of serotonin, and I think if you make a slide showing mock up of this app, you can attract more judge's attention.
I wish you good luck in this competition and have a nice day,
Yours sincerely,
Mahsa Hazbi