Samuel Szkuban
student
STU in Bratislava - Faculty of Civil Engineering
Slovakia
Interior Design
Arta is the former name of the Považská chocolate and confectionery factory, which operated on Kollárova Street in Piešťany in the interwar period. After… more
Omid Abbassi
advisor
https://www.bme.hu/
Iranian
"Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more
Dear Samuel,
Sometimes it is more ambitious to rehabilitate an existing space rather than creating a new one. Your project is a very good effort of renovation of an abandoned place in terms of physical planning, graphical presentation, and technical drawings as well as clear renderings but there are some missing points in your project that can improve the presentation. first of all, there is no clear diagram about the design process so that the whole scenario can be easily followed.
secondly, as your project is a sort of cultural space it is vital to combine renderings with appropriate personages to give a lively spirit to your presentation.
I wish you the best in your architectural journey.