Michaela Charvátová
student
FA VUT - Brno University of Technology, Faculty of Architecture
Czech Republic
Architecture
The upcoming building of the information centre responds to the lack of free space and disorientation of the entire complex. This created the shape of a ring,… more
David Ricardo
advisor
https://pasca.uajy.ac.id/program-magister/magister-arsitektur/
Indonesia
Design, building science, and digital architecture more
The main idea is a wonderful job but you should be improve your design for more.
For example, you want to generate a form of building for sun lighting, but you didn't a predicted sun movement with a design details of all windows. Treatment solution is a give a barrier or take a louvre/sun shading.
Second problem is a roof top with a grass. Where is the way and the function of the grass in the roof top? Maybe you can make a stair to there and make a new activity such as garden for studying or open coffee shop area. It will be a better design and function.
For the last, you can think again about room inside the room for forth floor. If you create a room inside room, the room is not getting an optimal sunlight and you should be placing some artificial lighting in there that is not a good idea for decrease energy especially for electricity energy.
Good luck!