Ayda El Batran
student
department of interior design of the faculty of art and design , msa university in 6 october city ,cairo
Egypt
Interior Design
Since the old times, beautiful flowers were growing in Egypt, thanks to its favorable climate. Several flower inscriptions appear on the Pharaonic monuments,… more
Saeed Shenakhteh
advisor
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iranian
As an architect with a positive view of the future of architecture and the impact of architecture… more
First of all, congratulations to you for participating in this competition and sharing ideas and plans to improve the quality of the architect. Continuing the theme of the design, which is a missing layer in the contemporary era, and re-grading such an issue is very important and of course necessary.
In the contemporary era, due to modern living conditions, the vacancy of nature, especially ornamental flowers, is felt, but it must also be considered that the cultivation of flowers and its promotion is suitable for the climate.
And about the design process, more research is needed, as well as expressing the design process and analysis in the form of diagrams. The less seen point in this work is the use of appropriate colors and contrasts, and of course, lighting needs more review.
In my opinion, less light and color has been used and to express the existence of flowers, choosing the type of material, color and light will help you more in this direction, for example, using neutral color and using materials such as metal with stone ?It will affect the elegance and tenderness of the flower.
In general, I can mention the following topics
positive points
1- Adherence to the design format
2- Ideas appropriate to the subject
3- Innovation in the form of design
4- Using golden proportions and geometric patterns
5- Lego design
Tips need to be reviewed and added
1- The correct use of site analysis has not been done or its exact use has not been mentioned
2- Diagrams do not indicate the advancement of design and only refer to the geometry of the design
3 -The correct use of color, light and materials is not
4- Innovation in practice and application of the subject is not seen
Thanks alot for this feedback , also thanks for mentioning the positive points which motivated me and I will reviewed the negative points.