Ma. Michaela Dangaran
student
National University - Manila
Philippines
Architecture
GRAND MOSQUE OF THE SOUTH Is a major plate in our subject, History of Architecture III wherein we tackled the emphasis of Islam Architecture from their roots… more
Nabil ROUBAI CHORFI
advisor
https://www.univ-mosta.dz/
algeria
Architect and PhD Lecturer. Vice-Dean of studies and student affairs - Faculty of science and… more
Dear Michaela,
Thank you for proposing this very interesting project. The subject you are addressing brings us back to various questions and urges us to think long and deeply to offer the most relevant architectural project.
In this regard, I advise you to expand your description of the project by focusing more on a problem. In this regard, it is necessary to make the difference between your objectives (to express Islamic architecture modern ) and the reflexive basis on which you intend to develop your project.
For example, you can explore the question of spatiality: can the space of the mosque be expressed by other than its classical configuration?
Because that's what we discover through your plans: an arrangement, a spatialization, connections, dimensions, almost immutable constants of the space of the mosque. However, if you want your practice of architecture to be constructive and to bring added value to the thought of contemporary design, you must be able to go further by linking spaces to practices but also to the senses. I recommend that you approach your layout of spaces through scenography, thinking more about dynamic routes rather than presenting frozen images where you can assume an interest given to constructive details rather than to impress.
Speaking of details, the visual effect of your porticoes leaning on mushroom columns is quite interesting, but you could be criticized for taking over common places in architecture for free, but beware of gratuitous gestures of architecture.
Please review these two references:
1-The Johson Wax company whose hypostyle room recalls what you are offering [https://images.app.goo.gl/qC2ghskDSAPi9eUe8]
2—The great mosque of Algiers whose porticoes are identical to yours. [https://images.app.goo.gl/KaiJqHtvmLWRJd7s9]
We are clearly not inventing anything and that architecture is made only of mimicry, but a well-done project is a project where the designer manages to develop a new problem and tries to respond to it with ingenious solutions.
To this end, I recommend that you re-examine the constructive and structural feasibility of the load-bearing elements that you propose,
1 - in terms of sizing related to the choice of materials: your columns give the impression of being too thin and unachievable if the choice had to be marble or not judicious if it was necessary to opt for another material and then disguise it in marble!
2-In terms of layout: a single row of slender columns to hold the openwork porticoes seems weak.
3 - in terms of stereotomy or texture: To this, I give you a single indication, that the interior of your dome takes up (in a somewhat lazy way) the texture of the walls.
4 - in terms of vegetation/mineral/hydraulic alliance: You know the role of water and vegetation in Islamic architecture. You should exploit the absence of urban constraints (if I guessed correctly from your perspective) to explore new types of spaces, offering themselves not only to practitioners but also to anyone wishing to gather and enjoy positive architecture.
Here, I don't want to burden you with remarks too, these are more than enough to resume a targeted reflection. This does not mean that you must worry and try to respond to all my comments. However, I would like you to ask yourself several questions from now on before tackling any architectural project to manage to design serenely with the feeling of a job well done.
Finally, the last problem with a philosophical dimension: you claim that the mosque is a sacred and essential place for all Muslims and that all Muslims are devoted to Allah. I also advise you to approach the building from a purely secular viewpoint, thus proposing it as work devoid of any proselytizing image, addressing all users. A mosque that you visit outside of prayer times would be much more interesting!