Rita TOUMA
student
USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik
Lebanon
Urban Design and Landscape
Sometimes we need a new chapter in the city's life to irradiate social disjunction. In a city where disjunction occurs, it is important to strive for a utopian… more
Mostafa Magdy
advisor
Al Shorouk Academy
Egyptian
Mostafa Magdy is a Teaching Assistant at the Architecture department of the Higher Institute of… more
Hello Rita, I have reviewed everything you have provided in the project and I found it super exciting and it can be a very good reference that I would recommend it to my students who would decide to make a restoration and development project of a city .. you had done a beautiful and powerful study before you start your project and you have presented it in a very beautiful and easy way to be understood which I super support it . You have mentioned the golden triangle many times which I don’t encourage.. I know that it is the strategy which you based your work in but if you mentioned it fewer than you have done it would have been better , you also mentioned that there is a lack of knowledge of the history of the city I would recommend that you add a museum to present the history of the city so the visitors can have a quick view over the project and its development also a cultural center would be a very good idea to enhance and establish the knowledge for the community of the city and the next generation as well .. overall I have liked it very much and I’m sure that you would grow to be a super architect who would make a real difference in the world if you stayed on the path and increased your knowledge in he same way you did
My greetings,
Mostafa Magdy
Teaching Assistant at Al Shorouk Academy “ translation: “Sunrise” Academy xD
Egypt