Ma. Michaela Dangaran, Gene Domer De Asis, Jacquelyn Olea, Aira Rico Del Rosario, Joseph Adam Galban
student
National University - Manila
Philippines
Architecture
A feasibility study for our subject, Professional Practice III. The proposed coffee shop, The KANAMI CAFE, is a commercial establishment that primarily sells… more
Mostafa Magdy
advisor
Al Shorouk Academy
Egyptian
Mostafa Magdy is a Teaching Assistant at the Architecture department of the Higher Institute of… more
Hello Michaela,
I'm happy to write to you and I hope that you accept my short feedback in a good way to improve your next projects
I have read the project idea, description & Technical information and they were very amazing and made me very excited to see the project that you have studied too much and put many aspects into the consideration before you start working on your project
When I opened the board of your project I couldn't see all the studies and work that you have done all that I have seen is a 3D shot only, I couldn't find the plans which show how the customers are moving through your project or the diagrams that show the structure, I couldn't also find diagrams that explain the studies that you have done before you start the project which weakens your project a little bit but I have loved the mass composition of the coffee shop and it looks so good but I couldn't find how your ideas turned into this composition.
Keep in mind that the studies that you make before you start is the most important thing which expresses your ideas clearly to everybody and differentiates you from your colleagues
thank you for your effort and I look forward to seeing your next masterpiece
Greetings,
Mostafa