Giorgi Dalalishvili
student
Ilia state university
Georgia
Architecture
Architecture shapes the environment, the environment shapes the person. Niqozi Occupied is a so-called seaside village named after the unequal and… more
Mostafa Magdy
advisor
Al Shorouk Academy
Egyptian
Mostafa Magdy is a Teaching Assistant at the Architecture department of the Higher Institute of… more
Hello Giorgi,
I love the idea of the project and how you transformed all of those complicated ideas into a simple form that can speak for itself and express your way of thinking in a simple way that the publicity can understand
I have only 2 problems that you need to focus on improving in the following projects
the first one you paid too much attention to the facades but to express your idea in a way that catches the attention of the viewer of your project whether it is a juror, student, or a researcher that wants to know more about the project you need to show how your ideas will also affect the spaces of your project
the second one is not a problem but maybe we can call it a suggestion that can enrich your ideas, in the middle part you can free the vegetation so you have the contrast that express the idea of your project because I couldn't find much difference between the lower and the mid parts
Overall I have loved it so much and I will wait to see your next amazing projects
Greetings,
Mostafa