Dikshya Pokharel

advisor

https://pcampus.edu.np/

Nepal

Architectural projects and visualization more

Dear Yuanhai Wei,
The most important feedback I would like to give is regarding a very simple communication technique, grounding the project. After a thorough analysis i was able to figure out that your project seems to be an entry for the STU campus competition. Giving context to your project should be the foremost focus at least when you are presenting your ideas. Before knowing what your ideas i would like to be grounded on where this site is, what are the surrounding features? from where do i approach? what is the problem you are trying to solve as an architect? Then going in detail about what your project ideas are, what are your proposed solutions could be discussed next. I highly recommend you to work on communicating your ideas more clearly. You have attempted to solve a traffic problem of pedestrian and vehicular traffic by trying to separate their path which is a good attempt, maybe you should work on internal circulation as well dividing areas that have more traffic volume to the areas that have less.
Regards,
Dikshya Pokharel