Dania Abu matar
student
Middle East
Jordan
Architecture
The project is a health center for the treatment of addiction, which provides therapeutic, health and psychological services to a certain category of people… more
Daniel Sirvent
advisor
https://cvnet.cpd.ua.es/curriculum-breve/es/sirvent-perez-cesar-daniel/7373
Spain
Professor of architecture at the University of Alicante, he teaches the subject "Singular… more
Dear Dania: Thank you very much for sharing your project.
The graphic representation has a lot of quality, congratulations.
However, if there is a typical architectural representation that can never be absent, it is a floor plan. If architects differ from sculptors in something, it is that our buildings are not just for looking at them: they are for using them. Without this floor plan, it is very difficult for me to express an opinion as an architect about your building.
On the other hand, I think it is very dangerous that architectural communication is reduced only to more or less photorealistic 'renders'. Architecture is fantastically expressed with initial hand-drawn sketches, models, etc. That's where intentions are expressed.
Finally, I also miss the own language of Architecture: space, light, time, circulations, etc. I invite you to revisit the great masters of Architecture to learn how to handle these concepts, which are the ones that every architect should use beyond images.
I wish you good luck in your studies and in your future professional life!