Francesco Leoni

advisor

www.polimi.it

Italian

I'm an architect with its own firm in Piacenza, Italy.I'm also an Adjunct Professor at Politecnico… more

Dear Muhammad Lazuardy Nurrohman,
first of all let me congratulate you on your project.
The intervention is particularly broad and complex and would merit a much more in-depth analysis than what I can do at a distance with only few images and few lines of description.
Nonetheless, there are some remarks that I think could be interesting for further development of the project.
The complex, from the outside, shows a very dense aspect and perhaps not sufficiently permeated by nature and the rest of the city, almost comparable to a "fortified citadel".
In the report you talk about energy sustainable buildings through the use of all new technologies. It would be interesting to try to implement these buildings with eco-friendly characteristics that are directly present in the compositional and volumetric design phase, such as the possibility of maintaining corridors for the wind, or adjusting the heights of the buildings on the courtyards to let the sun to permeate and not being always darkened.
Small stylistic notation: in a complex where modernity reigns supreme, I would avoid using wood-clad pillars such as those seen in the rendering of the court.
I invite you to continue in your application to try to improve yourself more and more, further raising your level.
Francesco Leoni