Ebru Emirbayer

advisor

https://z-p15.www.instagram.com/emirbayerebru/

Turkish

I am an Architect from Turkey.Last year of my bachelor, I studied in Poland and I attend… more

Dear Naji Sari,
I am appreciate that you registered your project in Inspireli.

First of all,You need to write your titles,diagram explanations in English in order to get more comprehensible for everyone.
-Your visualizations are interesting but you should improve it,For instance in your dark-night render,you should change the clouds.
-You had better to add more diagrams to convince us,I can't see the diagram which describes your shape construction or idea of creating this organic shape. .
-I like the idea of looking the visualizations from inside of plane but as I wrote, you should do them more realistic and put them in better quality.
-About the interiors,the solutions are so blur,you can solve theese plans apart or you can put them with displays more than two floor plans.If you place your interior visualitions bigger ,It will be more understandable.
-I haven't noticed any material details and sections or elevations.In architecture category,we need to present our idea with our equipments that are sections etc.You can put an elevation which shows front facade with materials.
The last one,You should change your colours in diagrams,you can utilize more soft colours.
Best Wishes, Keep working!
Ebru Emirbayer

Thank you very much, madam. I will explain it more later. You have to see the animated video below the pictures. It contains a lot of details, thank you. Is it suggested that I make a new registration so that I can show all the details