Ebrahim Al-suwaidi
student
Thamar university
Yemen
Architecture
Project introduction: The Science and Technology Oasis is an educational, cultural, and recreational project that aims to develop and develop the… more
Mariia Redkolis
advisor
https://knastu.ru/
Russian
Architecture. Interior design. Landscaping project. Urban design. more
The project looks quite informative and logically built.
Unusual futuristic form and natural mimicry organically fit into the existing buildings.
I would recommend the author of the project to pay attention to:
- Functional zoning.
In my opinion, the zoning of the object is not detailed enough in the project. It would be more efficient to make an additional view or diagram detailing the function of each zone within the building.
- Entrance groups and the center of gravity.
You can add several close-ups of the entrance group and, especially, the accent zone in the middle of the building. You can demonstrate the organization of these zones by adding a section of the building.
Also, depending on whether the project will be presented at international competitions, I would add a description of the details of each project in English.
Welcome, my dear.. Thank you for your comments.. I benefited from them and tried to work with them.. You can see what I added and make any comments.. Accept my sincere greetings