Gihan Malshan
student
University of Moratuwa (UoM), Faculty of Architecture, Department of Architecture, Moratuwa
Sri Lanka
Architecture
The existing building that designed the infill is a design I previously designed for a car parking building project.The Initial idea of the infill project is… more
Ayman Rabah
advisor
http://damasuniv.edu.sy/arch/
Syrian
Humanitarian Architect - interested in geometry and form finding methods by parametric tools.… more
Beginning with the concept of the project, it is very interesting that you are filling in between the abandoned areas or unused spaces in the city, for me, the first sketch attracts attention and I want to scroll further and explore the project.
there is not enough detailed analysis of the users or passenger’s numbers, such as when this place is empty or too crowded, this will help you think of more dynamic space depends on different timing.
the layout of the functions is logical and clear but it separated the space into 3 unconnected parts, it is not clear for me why you made such a bulky and solid path in the middle? I know you were trying to separate the passengers' path from the people who want to sit and gather, but there is an option to simplify the corridor and make it more transparent so all the users will somehow interact with the street sellers, others and with the surrounding environment.
I really liked your Curvy lines, the colored fabric elements on the ceiling, which adds dynamics and life to the project and to the idea, representing the fluidity of the users, and giving the project its unique style, also the hand drawings used perfectly to enhance this concept.
In general, the project highlights crucial ideas about linking spaces in the city, logical and functional, but it is better to simplify it, reduce the bulkiness in the middle, so your project could be finished in a better way to get a marvelous project.
All the best
If you have some questions, you can connect me on Instagram @Ayman Rabah
Thank you very much for this comment. very very important to me your feedback. And also these comments are very important for my future projects.