Abel Kefay
student
Unity University
Ethiopia
Architecture
An accredited health care facility dedicated to the specialized care of infants, children, and adolescents. Although adults may occasionally be treated for… more
Veronika Supruniuk
advisor
https://www.bstu.by/
Republic of Belarus
I'm a professional architect in the international company Varabyeu Partners. All of my projects are… more
Firstly, thank you for your participation in this contest.
According to the project, the great plus is using different renewable resources. This is really important both for the environment and for the secondary use of resources for consumption. I really like green roofs for children as playground. In my opinion, the idea of creating illuminated galleries (places to relax) inside the building is interesting, including colored frames on the facade. However, these frames are just facade decor, and I advise you to justify your decision when creating such frames. For example, make them as additional balconies for relaxation.
The second moment, this is a hospital. In my view, this building should be designed with a barrier-free environment, but there are many steps at the entrance.
Also I recommend to make plans (not constriction with a lot of text), but only to show you idea - simple plans. Because it's hard to read this plans. And improve your knowledge in visualization in the future.
In conclusion, you have done a great project, keep it up!
Thanks for your advice.