Vijesandiran Vidhushan

advisor

uom.ac.lk

Sri Lanka

Tropical Architecture more

The idea to connect the port functions and people is appreciable.

The presentational panels are fantastic and the balance of colors used and 3D renderings are extra ordinary.

Points to Improve.

1. The idea of radially dividing the spaces to capture the view and to create a focal point at the center involves a fair amount of thought process. But your thought process and effort is not efficiently conveyed through the project description or annotative diagrams.

2. Whenever creating and designing urban public spaces, you always have ask these questions from yourself.
- Who are the users? It is open to everyone or is it for a specific age, group or type of people?
- Why would people come and spend their time here? What makes this place iconic?
- How do I blend people with nature within a urban setting. - Better to always design a buffer zone between the city and nature intended public spaces.

3. It is always advisable to show your design in several layers (i.e. - Asphalt , Greenery , Public Functions, etc..) using a axonometric or isonometric diagram. This would make an impact on the reader at the 1st sight itself.

4. Have several public functions and green pockets which could meet the needs of people in all age categories and all background. This would retain people within the space you design for a longer period and people will always find a reason to visit and get themselves entertained.


Overall the idea is tremendous, creation of a focal point and surrounding it with greenery and allowing people to blend with nature, thought process and implementation of the design idea are phenomenal.

Keep up the good work.
Good luck.