Stanisław Czujkowski
student
West Pomeranian University of Technology, Faculty of Architecture
Poland
Architecture
In recent years, there has been a decline in social activity in various age groups, both in the elderly, people of working age, children and adolescents. Older… more
Farah Daghash
advisor
Alexandria University , faculty of engineering
Egyptian
Urban design has always been my main focus in my architectural studies and projects as it gives the… more
First of all, I would like to thank you on your great effort that is very visible in your work and illustrations , great job. However, I have to point to some minor points that I have noticed in the plans . First , there are some edgy rooms that have either unused space where the corners lie or very tight closed spaces due to the incidents created by those corners and it is reoccurring on the left area of the plan. second, the stairs in the core should be designed for fire emergencies which means that it has an exit directly lying on the outdoor area and it is isolated by a concrete wall without an elevator in the same space with the same door it , it could be next though and if one of the two stairs has an architectural purpose then at least one of them is designed for a fire emergency. The third thing is the furnishing around the columns that lie in the middle of the space so you should focus more on choosing a suitable structural system that would give you clean spaces or focus more on how to use the column as an element in the space like you've achieved in some other spaces that appeared in your renders. It would have also been a good plus if you've added the climatic conditions in the region where the building is placed and illustrate how you have treated your elevations as I can see that have given it a thought but as a foreigner , I lack such knowledge. The idea of the project is well written and your illustrations really made me understand almost everything that is happening although I don't understand polish so that is what we are looking for, something that speaks for itself. Finally, good luck !