Shafia Nursyabaniyah
student
UNPAR
Indonesia
Architecture
The project is located in Indonesia which is the largest archipelagic country in the world with a larger percentage of the sea area than the land. Indonesia's… more
I like the idea of the project and the description, but I have some comments on the form, and presentation. The circle is the strongest shape, and having many of them distributed without clear definition, and with all the lines in the facade make it hard to spot a focal point. I believe that having smoother forms or organic shapes might have been better in providing the metaphorical sense of water. For the mood of the images I think that it should've looked lighter and more ethereal to serve the purpose of the project. It could also be very refreshing if you can play with the form and landscape in a way that goes in harmony with the context rather than being imposed on it to better serve the idea of preserving biodiversity and conserving endemic species.
I will share with you some examples that might help you rethink the form and visuals. I also suggest having a mood board on pinterest for more inspiration.
Thank you so much for your efforts, and I wish you all the best in your progress!
https://www.theplan.it/eng/award-2020-culture/clever-water-rhyme-yuexiu-selene-isle-1026-steven-linjin-mingliu-zimojose-m-rubiohou-zhiheng
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/architecture-architecture-design-design--602286150173919837/
https://www.designboom.com/architecture/niko-architect-organic-house-landscape-moscow-12-05-2019/