Mahsa Mohebbi, Mitra Mohebbi , Amin Moazzen
student
IAUCTB
Islamic Republic of Iran
Architecture
The building is inspired by a type of cactus called Crassula. It is a symbol of love for nature, peace, unity, endurance, peaceful life and survival. The… more
Joel Mukalay Kime Mukena
advisor
http://architecture.riseba.lv/en
Congolese
Sustainable Architectural design of public and administrative buildings in light of climate change… more
Your project description of "Crassula" is truly impressive. The level of detail you have provided effectively showcases the functionality, sustainability, and eco-friendly aspects of your concept. I commend you for presenting all the necessary elements in a convincing manner.
The concept of "Crassula," symbolizing love for nature, peace, unity, endurance, and a peaceful life, built upon the pyramid concept of the Choghaznabil Ziggurat in Iran, served as a perfect foundation for the concept you have developed. The building design has successfully captured the essence of this concept. Your thorough study of energy consumption during different seasons, incorporating natural light, and recognizing the importance of trees and nature in enhancing human comfort and tranquility is evident in your project.
However, one aspect that could be improved is the visual representation of your project. While the text description is well-crafted, it lacks the necessary visual aids to complement your words. Enhancing the project's visual representation would greatly benefit its overall presentation and understanding. Additionally, the text description could be streamlined by organizing the information into appropriate sections, avoiding repetition, and ensuring a smooth flow for the reader.
Overall, your team has done an impressive job with the project, but there is still room for improvement. I encourage you to continue refining your work and placing more emphasis on visual representations to enhance the comprehension and impact of your concept. Well done, and keep up the good work!
Dear Joel Mukalay Kime Mukena,
Thank you very much for your comments and suggestions