Humayera Marzan
student
Military Institute of Science and Technology
Bangladesh
Architecture
Bangladesh got to be free after 9 months of liberation war. In 1971 numerous killings happened by the Pakistan armed forces and their supporting Razakar, Al… more
Alexander Grebennikov
advisor
University of Oulu, Department of Architecture, Oulu, Finland
Russian
Parametric modelling, algorithmic design, BIM, computer science more
It is hard to find in this project something disappointing - this is a good professional work. The overall idea matches perfectly the initial purpose of commemorative place and seems suitable for the climate of the area. I can not say anything bad about it - certainly the project is ready for further structural development and construction. I liked the idea of passages there - it creates the flow for the visitors, so it is not that impression of stable contemplation as usual commemortive places can provide. The overall bare concrete also creates feeling of brutality of this historical event and also connects the structure to modernist classics of this part of the world. The physical model also demonstrates that its creator has a really good sense of spatial relations, scale and usabilty.
I didn't like blurred edges on every rendering - that's unnesessary and can spoil the impression. With a closer look to the plans one can find strange spaces as results of implementation of columns and other structural elements into the main architectural shape - but this is ok for this stage of design process and can be fixed together with structural consultants.
This is for sure a good work, the author demonstrates a good artictic taste and abilty to create complex and imrpessive spaces.