Camila Dussan
student
University of los Andes, Bogotá Colombia, Faculty of architecture and design
Colombia
Architecture
The project is a habitable monument that evokes the past and is a structure for the future. It combines the arch, the labyrinth, the garden, and the memory. more
Ahmad Faisal
advisor
University of Southern California, USC School of Architecture
Pakistani
High end residential and hospitality more
Hi Camila. The description for your project Accumulated vestiges: temporal strata, truly comes alive in your drawings. One can see the amalgamation of the past with the present and future in your project. The use of the arch as the main architectural element brings out the aspect of the ruin clearly in your project while at the same time showing its relevance in today's architecture.
My comment on your work would be that I think adding colour to your drawings would make your ideas more clear, especially in regards to the central garden. As it is currently the garden gets lost in your drawings since the colours you have used are monotone. It would be interesting to see the same drawings in the darker colour scheme with a pop of green for the garden or perhaps using a different background colour to make the ruins stand out more. That would also convey a ray of hope for the future of this land that has gone through much suffering as a consequence of the avalanche' showing rebirth and growth. Furthermore, I think adding line work to your section and plan drawings like you have for your section isometric drawings will also make them read clearer.
All in all I think your project is truly successful in what it is trying to accomplish. Having never been to Armero, Colombia, your beautiful drawings transport me to this place that has suffered a great loss and your project stands as a monument to its history and survival. I look forward to seeing more of your work