Ebrahim Al-suwaidi
student
Thamar university
Yemen
Architecture
Yemen Antiquities Museum Project The project is a response to a distress call launched by Yemeni antiquities from time to time as a result of the loss,… more
Iyad Sawaftah
advisor
https://www.kent.ac.uk/
Jordanian
I'm focusing in semiotics in architecture + interested in understanding of visualisation theories … more
Dear Ebrahim,
First of all, I would like to say that you did very well. I really appreciate your thinking and the way how the project integrated with the site, how you translated your design decisions into design masses and language.
Also, I would like to mention how your project will act as a landmark according to its location in the city!
What is interesting in your project is the public spaces on your ground level, how these spaces will enhance the socializing between the users.
But, I was preferring to see the architectural drawings of this project, not only the perspectives, in order to understand more how this project is related to the surroundings and how the architectural experience between the spaces is worked.
In addition, for the entrance zone, it would be better if you make that mass more mysterious without that much of openings like just giving a glimpse for the visitor because that will let the users be more excited to see what is inside.
Lastly, try to keep the façade elements simple, you don't need that much of elements because it will exaggerate visually.
Well done!