Zlata Krylova
student
CTU in Prague - Faculty of Civil Engineering
Czech Republic
Architecture
The task was a simplified architectural study of the above-mentioned building on the land between the Na Františku hospital and St. Agnes Monastery near Dvořák… more
Maram Abbas
advisor
https://tishreen.edu.sy/
Syrian
urban planning, planning protection coastal cities& waterfronts from sea level rise. to provide… more
Dear Zlata Krylova, hope you are doing well
i'm really appreciate your efforts on the project.
the concept very nice, the functions on the plan very good, the circulation also good but there is missing ramp in the 1st basement you should study this point.
Actually my main comment on your project about the mass it self, very massive, and heavy if we would to illustrate the cloud as you mention before. and its not proportional, the cloud is very slightly, simple, and pure item so i recommended you to take this subjects when create the mass. i recommended you develop your 2nd sketch, make the mass by use just a roof like an umbrellas of cloud covered all the things under it and be as landscape mark and for walls in floor under it create it with glass to create contrast with mesh and void
as well as, to stimulate it with historical surroundings.
sincerely, wish for your great future