salma ashraf mansour
student
Faculty of Fine Arts, Alexandria University in Alexandria
Egypt
Interior Design
Since the world is on its way to a third industrial revolution where artificial intelligence will represent the future of the world in the coming years, The… more
This is a very good and articulated project.
Good presentations, renders and data.
Few things I would like to comment on:
1. Plans > As an Architect/ Student. Plans are the most important part of project. We design and develop through it. The plans needs elaboration, details, also there must be a progress of development shown. Labeling is very important part. Reflecting your program, space design is essential. Representation of the Plans and its part shall be made in views, elevation and renders.
2. Materiality > There should also be details about Material and materiality. Finishes, details, etc.
Overall, it looks like a very good project. Specially the Connecting staircase. That should be focused in development and rendering part. Need more to talk about it and its connectivity throughout the project.
Good Luck