Sepehr Mohseni
student
University of Science and Culture
Islamic Republic of Iran
Architecture
The site is located in the center of Tehran , Iran. the center of city is crowded so the cultural center was designed as a unique building to become a landmark… more
Mariia Gonchar
advisor
Odessa State Academy of Construction and Architecture, Architectural and Art's Institute, Odessa
Ukrainian
3D printing for construction, 3D printing buildings, Solarpunk, Cyberpunk, Computer generated… more
Sepehr, congratulations on your project for the Mercalli Cultural Center, located in the heart of Tehran, Iran. Your effort in designing a unique and culturally significant landmark is evident, and it's great to see your dedication to enhancing the local cultural experience. I'd like to offer some constructive feedback to help you further develop your project and contribute to your professional growth:
1. Architectural Innovation: Your project idea is ambitious and reflects a desire to create a standout cultural center. However, consider pushing the boundaries of architectural innovation. Are there unique design elements, materials, or construction techniques that can set your project apart from others? Look for inspiration from different architectural styles, both locally and globally, to infuse your design with creativity.
2. Sustainability: Given the global focus on sustainability in architecture, consider incorporating eco-friendly features into your design. Explore possibilities for using sustainable materials, energy-efficient systems, and environmentally responsible construction methods. This will not only benefit the environment but also contribute positively to the center's long-term operating costs.
3. Cultural Context: While aiming to create a landmark, it's crucial to ensure that your design respects and integrates with the local cultural context. Research Iranian architectural traditions and consider how you can incorporate elements that reflect the rich history and culture of the region.
4. Functionality: Ensure that your architectural plan optimizes the functionality of the Cultural Center. Think about the flow of visitors, accessibility, and the overall user experience. Make sure the amphitheater, restaurant, cafe, classrooms, and gallery are well-connected and easy to navigate.
5. Materials: The use of PVC slabs and concrete is interesting, but also look into the long-term sustainability and maintenance aspects of these materials. Additionally, explore how you can use these materials in a visually appealing way or consider incorporating more natural and locally-sourced materials to add warmth and character to the building.
6. 3D Visuals: It's great that you have included 3D models and visualizations with textures and landscape. Ensure that these visuals effectively communicate your design intent. Consider using them to convey the project's atmosphere, both inside and outside the building.
7. Project Presentation: Your project description is a bit brief. Expand on the conceptual framework, inspirations, and design philosophy that guided your decisions. This will help the jury understand your thought process and creative vision more thoroughly.
8. Cultural Impact: Emphasize how your design will positively impact the local community and contribute to cultural enrichment. Articulate how the different cultural spaces will promote cultural exchange and engagement.
9. Budget and Feasibility: While this may not be explicitly mentioned, it's essential to consider the project's budget and feasibility. How will you manage costs and timelines to bring this project to fruition? Addressing these practical aspects can be equally important as the design itself.
10. Feedback and Collaboration: Don't hesitate to seek feedback from professors, architects, and other professionals. Collaborate with experienced architects or mentors who can provide you with guidance and insights to refine your project further.
Sepehr, your vision for the Mercalli Cultural Center is promising. Continue to refine and expand upon your design, considering these aspects to create a project that not only impresses the jury but also leaves a lasting positive impact on the cultural landscape of Tehran. Best of luck with your professional growth and the Inspireli Awards.
Dear Mariia Gonchar, I'm really thankful, your review was very helpful and I appreciate it.