Labeeb Aljallad

advisor

Tishreen University

Syrian

Urban design more

We are happy to see the work done by the architect Succès Allandiguim which aims to show the design idea based on the basic elements of architecture: line and volume. Below are some praises and recommendations for the external composition of the project within the awards.

One of the basic elements in the architectural design process is color, font, size, and composition. you have used them in a way that suggests beauty

1)Planning and gardening:
We notice the presence of thoughtful green spaces in fairly correct proportions Paying attention to garden and landscape details gives the project a somewhat more precise visual balance. Therefore, more detail should be used in gardens and agricultural gardening.



2)Building materials:
When using building materials, the construction focused on reinforced concrete, iron, and glass. It is a beautiful thing, but we must introduce environmental sustainability according to certain standards. Therefore, we must use to some extent environmental materials, recycled materials, or local materials.

Congratulations, you have used your idea in the composition in an innovative way, but we must pay attention to the entrance, as the entrance in the residential unit is considered an important factor in the composition, and therefore you must have it more clearly


The main view of the street is desirable when designing residential units, but the height of the surrounding wall must be taken into consideration to create privacy for this place. We do not find here any privacy for the spaces with the low-height wall.


Attention must also be paid to the details of the paving of the general site, and the entrance must be highlighted and given From a functional standpoint When distributing jobs linearly, boredom must be broken There is a note in the living room. The continuity of the corridor creates length in the functional solution. A way can be found in redecorating the living room to break the length in the main corridor.


The idea of ​​intermingling green elements with the functional solution in the site gives spirit to the interior design, but the quality of these trees must be studied because some trees may grow large at their heights, which leads to hiding the sunlight from the block in the future and creates a feeling of discomfort.


Conclusion The idea of ​​the project is beautiful, as it achieves the principle of beauty in simplicity, but there must be many details that will benefit this project. My advice to you is to never hesitate to ask any of the professors and architects specialized in this field.

Succès Allandiguim showed a quiet strength of determination and attention to feedback A very special configuration can be seen that has more chances of winning prizes
wish you all success