RAISA RAHMAN, FARIA RAHMAN EUNA, MOHSEN BIN MOZAMMEL
student
BRAC University, Department of Architecture, Dhaka
Bangladesh
Urban Design and Landscape
THE OBJECTIVE OF THE PROJECT WAS TO STUDY THE EDGE OF A CANAL THAT IS DYING GRADUALLY DUE TO URBANIZATION, ANALYZE THE REASONS BEHIND IT AND PROVIDE A SOLUTION… more
Anthony Musevu Kashit
advisor
University of KwaZulu-Natal, School of Architecture, Planning and Housing, Durban
South Africa
Educational building design and Urban design. more
Your urban analysis is comprehensive and well-illustrated, successfully informing us about the issues surrounding the canal. On that note, the constant use of analytical sections and annotated diagrammatic plans of the urban fabric is a very good strategy. Indeed, your proposition would purge the area of many sorts of pollution and revitalise the area with activities that would give more ‘right to the city’ to people than to motorised vehicles. This is a sensible thing to do in urban design.
Having said that, I think you could have pushed your project to another level by developing the design of the built form a little bit more. For instance, it would have been interesting to see some form of developed architectural presentation of the Cafe you have proposed within the streetscape.
Finally, I would suggest that you structure your presentation into two categories: The first category could contain your site analysis, and the second category could contain your proposal.
I wish you a very successful process!
Dear Anthony Musevu Kashit, Thank you so much for your kind and insightful words. Will definitely keep your advice in mind and work on it attentively.