Bouchra RAH
student
Université international de rabat UIR
Morocco
Urban Design and Landscape
Located opposite BAB LKHMISS in Sale Morocco, which is a monumental gate situated to the southeast of the city walls, the studied site benefits from a… more
VIPIN WILSON
advisor
Anna University - Tamil Nadu
Indian
Indulging in Architecture is my source of inspiration, a wholehearted novice with the qualities of… more
Dear Bouchra RAH,
Very glad to see your approach to a public space, some of the things I would like to see more than what you have presented are the existing site conditions, under the impression from your description that the site is a real one and that the problems are also existing so it would have been great if that was shown somewhere. I like the way you have described your approach to your design but what I found missing was the lack of information in the presentation as the sheets were mainly views. I would have loved to see how you addressed each of the issues you stated in the write-up with your proposal. Also more reasoning on why was bamboo the choice of material would have been a strength to your design.
I hope my comments help you in your upcoming projects.