Jenil Sarvaiya
student
Kamla Raheja Vidyanidhi Institute for Architecture and Environmental Studies, Mumbai
India
Architecture
Water Quarry is a groundbreaking initiative aimed at breathing new life into abandoned quarries, viewing them not as desolate spaces but as opportunities for… more
Anthony Musevu Kashit
advisor
University of KwaZulu-Natal, School of Architecture, Planning and Housing, Durban
South Africa
Educational building design and Urban design. more
Many times, we tend to move towards new enterprises in our social development while leaving behind a trail of unresolved issues. We keep reaching out for new solutions as if we hope that the issues left behind will magically disappear, only to find that the further we go, the bigger the problems left behind us become.
This is why I would like to commend you for having the courage to look back into the shadow that the past modern era cast on our societies today. By addressing the consequences of urban planning mistakes during the industrial boom, you do not negate the contribution of such a period but bring in factors that have long been neglected: the impact of 'development' on society and the environment we share with the rest of the planet. Thus, your project, beyond being grounded within the local community through the building typology you proposed, is an admirable effort to contribute to solving the problems of the past. So, good choice of social issue and good approach as well. You also have a good analytical presentation that gives a sense of chronological origin to the problem. I also appreciate how you have considered the use of materials found on the site, particularly when it is such a robust material as stone, which guarantees the building's longevity within a sustainable framework. I would only suggest a few things, such as making your building typology a little more evident so that one would not struggle to figure out what type of space it is. One way to do that is by visually filling the space with activities. This would render to the building a very exeperiencial impression.
To sum up my opinion, you did a good job addressing a social issue with architectural responsibility; you can just do some presentational refinement.
Good luck!