Brylle Kylle Oidem
student
Technological Institute of the Philippines-Manila (TIP-Manila) and Quezon City (TIP-QC) College of Architecture and Engineering
Philippines
Architecture
We are introduced to and still inhabit a world of architecture where the binary concept dominates our sense of spatial organization. This framework… more
Mingshan Fang
advisor
Illinois Institute of Technology, College of Architecture
United States of America
sustainability, aviation more
The presentation for 'KULTUAWRA: Harmony in Diversity' effectively communicates the inclusive spirit of the project through vivid imagery and a harmonious mix of architectural languages that align well with the project's ethos. The inclusion of a gender-neutral restroom underscores the thorough research undertaken, while the floor plan demonstrates a cohesive layout that complements the building's curvilinear form and architectural ribs. The design's intention to reflect a spectrum of inclusivity across various dimensions is commendably integrated throughout the project.
However, the documentation lacks clear evidence on the feasibility of reusing "pre-designed module components" in a modular construction approach, with no detailed drawings or diagrams provided to support this claim. While the project champions inclusivity, it predominantly focuses on gender and racial diversity, overlooking other critical dimensions such as accessibility for individuals with visual, hearing, neurodiversity, or mobility challenges. The presentation materials, while visually striking, lean towards the abstract, with the use of colorful materials throughout the building not adequately demonstrating materiality or considerations for practical construction. Furthermore, the inconsistent use of entourage styles, varying between line drawings and photorealistic depictions, raises questions about the intent and coherence of the visual presentation strategy.
Dear Mingshan Fang,
I genuinely appreciate your feedback. I was surprised by the insights you provided, as they raised issues that I had not anticipated but are crucial to the project. Your feedback has given me valuable perspective, and I am truly grateful for it. I will take the time to reflect on it and ensure that I am more mindful during the ideation process going forward. Thank you once again for your thoughtful feedback.