Avantika Verma
student
Indian Institute of Technology Roorkee, Uttarakhand
India
Architecture
The project titled “Jammu Habitat Centre” is an attempt to create a multi functional facility in the heart of Jammu. It aims to address the increasing need of… more
Khulukani Bila
advisor
University of Pretoria
South Africa
my architectural focus prioritizes public interest design, particularly in the South African… more
Greetings Avantika Verma,
Firstly, I would like to commend you on a beautifully visualized project. However, the lack of technical information such as site plans, floor plans, sections, and site analysis makes it rather difficult to fully understand the intention behind the project. For someone unfamiliar with your work, these missing elements are crucial for providing context, showcasing how you have organized the space, and demonstrating the design principles employed to create a space of culture and interaction.
It is also important to articulate what culture you intend the space to embody, ensuring that this intention is reflected in the design. As it stands, the design could appear in any location and does not clearly respond to the unique context of Jammu.
Congratulations on your submission.