Loulyana Alchalabi
student
Qatar university
Qatar
Architecture
THE FUNCTION: Imagine a space not of sterile walls and rigid routines, but a place where you experiment, work on concrete projects, where your ideas do not… more
Omid Abbassi
advisor
https://www.bme.hu/
Iranian
"Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more
Dear Loulyana,
Thank you for sharing your project with the INSPIRELI Awards. I would like to offer some feedback on what you’ve done well and areas where there could be improvements.
*Strengths:
1- Modular Spaces: The idea of having modular spaces that can be extended in the future is a strong key point of your project, providing flexibility and potential for growth.
2- Literature Background and Case Studies: The thorough literature background and well-analyzed case studies give a solid foundation to your project, demonstrating a deep understanding of relevant concepts.
3- Floor Plans and Spatial Diagrams: The exploded floor plans and spatial diagrams are well-organized, aiding in the clear comprehension of the project's layout and design intent.
4- Structural Consideration: The attention to structural considerations and practical solutions is commendable and crucial for the project's feasibility.
*Areas for Improvement:
1- Scale Shifts in Design: For large-scale projects, it’s important to maintain a design narrative that shifts continuously between large and small scales to ensure cohesion and consistency. This could be better reflected in your design process diagrams and the positioning of the layouts.
2- Graphical and Technical Presentation: For an architectural project, focusing more on graphical and technical presentations rather than extensive literature descriptions would be more effective. Consider reducing the number of pages and creating a clear portfolio that emphasizes graphical representation, a well-organized color palette, and technical drawings that address the project's requirements.
Overall, your project has strong foundational ideas and is well-considered in many solutions. By focusing more on graphical representations and ensuring design cohesion across scales, your project can become even more compelling.
Best regards,
Omid
Dear Omid Abbassi,
Thank you for your insights and thorough feedback that will surely be taken into consideration in future projects!