Isuru Kanchana Ehelaarachchige
student
University of Moratuwa (UoM), Faculty of Architecture, Department of Architecture, Moratuwa
Sri Lanka
Architecture
The perception of clay roof tiles as weak and brittle has resulted in the popularity of alternatives like asbestos and zinc/aluminum sheets. Nonetheless,… more
Omid Abbassi
advisor
https://www.bme.hu/
Iranian
"Architecture is a dangerous mixture of power and impotence." ( Rem Koolhaas ) more
Dear Isuru,
I would like to express my congratulations on this nice project. It has many good aspects, and I like the way you expanded your idea by presenting it with sufficient supporting details.
*Strengths:
1- Smart Initial Steps: The first steps toward reaching a satisfying result have been taken very smartly by identifying the issue, raising the right questions directly, and trying to find compatible solutions.
2- Design Process Diagrams: The design process diagrams effectively explain the evolution of the idea in both formal and practical aspects.
3- Cohesive Graphical Presentation: The cohesion of the graphical presentation is absolutely admirable, both in 2D and 3D drawings.
4- Detailed Presentation: The level of detail has a strong connection to answering the requirements, with shifts between different scales in each phase of the presentation.
*Areas for Improvement:
1- Interior Views: Adding some interior views would help explain the idea more completely from another angle.
2- Scaled Drawings: Magnifying some parts of the floor plans, elevation, and section by altering the drawing scale to 1:50 or even 1:20 partially would provide a better understanding of your project.
Overall, your project demonstrates a thoughtful and well-documented design process with strong graphical cohesion and attention to detail. By incorporating interior views and using varied drawing scales, you can further enhance the comprehensiveness and clarity of your presentation. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing your continued development.
Best regards,
Omid
Dear Omid Abbassi,
I would like to express my heartfelt thanks for giving feedback on my project, by sacrificing your valuable time.
Your feedback will be very helpful for my next projects.
isuru