rozhan wazir
student
Duhok University - Collage of engineering - Architectural Department
Iraq
Urban Design and Landscape
The idea of the project in the Bare seli have problem no modern project to visitor came and this place have extractive place so i design my project inspiration… more
Samer Samarani
advisor
USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik
United States of America
Residential - Commercial - Health - open space - Landscape more
We would like to gain a deeper understanding of the symbolism and cultural significance of the sun in Iraqi culture and how this ties into the broader narrative of the project. While Oscar Niemeyer’s influence provides a strong conceptual foundation, the student should focus on evolving those forms to respond thoughtfully to the site’s unique context and the project’s programmatic needs rather than replicating his style.
The use of façade elements, which appear to serve as the building’s structure, is a strong concept. However, as a designer, I would recommend distinguishing between the architectural character of the residential buildings and that of the public buildings. This differentiation would allow visitors to clearly perceive the distinct functions and characteristics within the project. Additionally, it would be beneficial to include a board explaining the circulation and access routes from the parking areas to the residential units, as this is a crucial aspect of the project.
Sustainability has been addressed thoroughly, but I would encourage the student to demonstrate a few strategies that actively preserve and protect the remote site. The site’s topography presents a significant challenge, and while sections taken from Google Earth provide a starting point, they lack detail. More in-depth analysis of the grading is essential, and I would encourage the student to explore this further.
The student’s overlay of findings from the site study is an excellent tool to establishing the master plan design. Overall, the site analysis is comprehensive, but the presentation could be more cohesive in terms of color palette, which would enhance clarity and unity.
From a technical perspective, the drawings are clear enough to effectively communicate the project, but refining some of these elements could strengthen the overall presentation.