Nessma Waleed
student
Faculty of Fine Arts, Alexandria University in Alexandria
Egypt
Architecture
The city of Assiut is located in one of the governorates in the Arab Republic of Egypt and lacks foreign tourism. It also lacks the presence of a national… more
Morteza Asghari Vahed
advisor
Tabriz university
Islamic Republic of Iran
"The development of geometric structures under conditions that foster a flexible and responsive… more
In this project, the positive points that exist, and in my opinion, were a good perspective, are firstly, you have considered views from various distances to your project, meaning that the design of your project's skyline was somewhat based on the observer's position and distances. This was good. Another good aspect was the interaction with the architectural space.
Another issue was your project's zoning, where the project's formation platform was divided into three sections based on three walls with triangular angles. Now, why three sections and why the angles are shaped this way, and whether an alternative state could have been envisioned for it or not (of course, all of this goes back to your project's formal concept, which I haven't understood up to this point). I currently have no discussion about this.
However, what happened to the project afterward is debatable. The geometry of these three walls that distinctly defined the project is not seen at all in the continuation of the work. They only provided us with three extensions where a series of cubic volumes with 90-degree angles were formed along these extensions. For instance, when I look at various project sections (C_C / D_D) and Isometric plans, your dominant design geometry does not match the primary geometry of these three walls, which you highlighted as the organizational feature of this project.
Moreover, regarding the diagram you showed about the extension of viewpoints of the project's observers in different spatial experience positions as a section diagram in the visual contact area, when I saw these diagrams, it seemed more to me like dealing with a hypertext three-dimensional spatial organization flow. But later, I saw that the formation of your project's various spaces alongside each other was based more on a classical structure than a hypertext structure.
In designing a project, you need to have a spatial organization concept upon which your entire project should be based, be it the organizational structure of volumes, the site, or even the railings that you implement for your project's platforms.
Dear Morteza Asghari Vahed,thank you