Galang Setia Rahman
student
Ciputra University (UC / Universitas Ciputra)
Indonesia
Architecture
NYENI Communal & Gallery Space aims to provide a platform for artists in Surabaya. The reason behind establishing this space is the lack of venues for young… more
Sergei Remarchuk
advisor
Tomsk State Architecture and Building
Russian Federation
Architectural design, urban planning, environmental design. more
Dear Galang Setia Rahman!
You've done a good project.
Your idea is also clear and does not raise questions.
However, there are a number of comments that I would like to eliminate in the future:
1. The urban planning context is not clear. Why is the shape of the arrangement of objects exactly this way and not another?
2. Lighting inside also raises questions: some buildings are turned 180 degrees relative to others. For a gallery, light is very important.
3. The combination of the selected structures and materials is not completely clear: why wood, metal and concrete? Are there too many tasks for a designer?
4. It’s also confusing if your spaces are too open. What if there is a strong wind? What if there is a typhoon? How to protect the people and paintings inside?
Nevertheless, your work took place.
Good luck in the future!