Franc Obguia

advisor

Cebu Institute of Technology – University (CIT-U), College of Engineering and Architecture, Cebu City

Philippines

Architecture and Sustainability more

The diagrams are well-presented, but the renders can be further enhanced through post-processing. Consider adding more information or annotations to the diagrams, such as the names of the spaces depicted in each perspective. Additionally, ensure that the museum’s name is included in the diagram for better context. In terms of realism, the renders can be improved by refining the lighting and shadows to create a more natural and immersive atmosphere. Paying close attention to how light interacts with different materials and spaces will help achieve better imagery. Furthermore, the perspectives and images do not fully capture the inspiration, historical references, and modern interpretations of Turkish architecture. Reassessing the composition and architectural elements can help better communicate the design intent.

Overall, the concept is strong, and the diagrams are well-structured. With additional refinements in post-processing and contextual clarity, the visuals can be significantly improved.

I appreciate you for joining the contest and I hope you do well in the Architecture field!