Blendi Leci, Leart Damoni, Florian MIftari, Melisa Krasniqi
student
University of Prishtina
Kosovo
Architecture
This project aims to establish a connection between the formal richness of postmodern architecture and a contemporary approach to urban space. Rooted in… more
Khalil Taleeslami
advisor
Islamic azad university hamedan
Islamic Republic of Iran
Maximum innovation and creativity by looking at the experience of the past and helping to reduce… more
I congratulate you on your admirable courage and for stepping out of the cliché cocoon and presenting your own interpretation that you liked. Some things can be mentioned to improve this design:
-The hemispherical form, which is subtracted from the overall volume, is not very proportional to the overall volume and does not clearly introduce the direction of the entrances to the hotel (there is not much emphasis on the entrance doors, although the empty space is generally inviting.
2-Two separate external entrance doors can be converted into one large and clear door so that all visitors enter through one door before the space between the two doors, then in the space between the two doors, the paths can be separated.
3-The division of the main lobby's interior space is not very consistent with the overall volume and concept. It could have been a large lobby and the reception in front of the main entrance, and then the spaces could have been separated so that both the overall lobby could be known and the beauty of the ground floor space would be doubled.
3-On the mezzanine floor, the entrances, especially from the commercial staircase, are not very expressive and clear.
4-On the first floor, the central space and corridors are not very attractive and the space The interior will look boring
5- Overall, it is a beautiful volume, but there is a better volume that not only does not overshadow the performance of the building, but also adds to the richness of the performance.
6- The setbacks are either not used or the method of their use and application is not presented except for the roof function, and these setbacks themselves have a negative impact on the plan and performance on the upper floors.
In the end, the structural decisions and use of the introduced technologies are good, but they are not yet complete.
I wish you to reach higher levels in your professional life.